Sunday, June 27, 2010

"Your wish is my command," he told her. She nearly swooned, so taken was she with his eloquent speech, impeccable manners, and delicious chivalry. Little did she know that he was all charm, all fake promises. He was all caught up in the moment, not thinking of the gravity of the situations he was putting himself in. She was young and innocent, completely entranced by his noble radiance. His smile, you couldn't miss his smile by a mile, so bright it shined, its radiance echoed in her eyes. Towards the end she really fought it, she figured out what was coming: the broken heart, the sadness, the tears even; all stemming from that tiny portion of her life that soon took over her whole being. No matter how hard she tried, she still fell in love with him.

4 comments:

  1. oh. my. goodness. beautiful...

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  2. I bet he had a mustache. An amazing mustache. It's always the men with the suave mustache. (It's the give-away.)

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  3. Yes, I agree pumkyn. Or he could have had no facial hair, rendering him more innocent in appearance.

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  4. wow. you have a way of writing that just brings everything to life! i had to read this post three times just to take it all in and grasp all you had written. way to use your God given gifts...im excited to read what else you write!
    -megan

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